Sunday, September 12, 2010

Sweet Land - Map Final Assessment

 There was a really big Sweet land.There are three countries in this big land: Gum, Lollipop, and Candy.
One thousand years ago, Gum was the biggest country and a lot of people lived there. There was a river in the middle of three countries but Gum used to much sugar and they dismissed a lot of dirty water and trash out the river so Lollipop wanted to kill Gum so the war had begun.
Gum was the sweetest but after they dismissed a lot of bad things so they became the meanest land. Ten years later, it still happened so lollipop took their soldiers to Gum's land then attacked them but Gum has a group of soldiers that could hold Lollipop stayed and Gum took more soldiers to come up their for help. Lollipop needed to get back to their land because Gum was so strong and all of the soldiers from Lollipop land was died a lot. Nick was the leader of Gum land. A few of soldiers came back and went to the capital city to tell Zack. Zack was the strongest man in the lollipop land but Nick's land was bigger and stronger than his land so he ran to Jerry's land for help. It's also a big wind flew into Lollipop land so it was destroyed and Gum came their. Then Jerry and Zack wanted to destroyed and killed Nick so they had a big plan to get around Nick's land and revenge for Zack. 1 day later, Nick's land was destroyed by Zack and Jerry so Zack got their land back. Jerry and Zack were having a nice life with each other and help each other. One year later, the population went up a lot because there was a lot of family and children.
                                                                    ~THE END~

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